Cannot Tame the Rewrite?

I wrote Cannot Tame the Wind back in 2016, after throwing it on Amazon for a while I've pulled it and decided I could rework and rewrite it some to make it a better story.  Going to be posting it chapter by Chapter at RoyalRoad and hopefully get some feedback to help with making it the best story. The fun thing is I had intended on writing a trilogy then put it aside to let it breath and just forgot about it. Still no guarantee of the trilogy, but I do want to improve the story.

In theory it'll appear here once approval is complete,  will update the link if it changes, probably take a few days for approval.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/92369/Cannot-Tame-The-Wind